Make this below paragraph more engaging and curious with proper grammar, please.Don't make it too long.. at most 1000 characters."Imagine a world where fire blazed and ice melted, their inner workings a baffling mystery. Then came Rudolf Clausius, a scientific visionary who dared to challenge the notion of a perfectly ordered universe. He introduced the concept of entropy – a measure of the hidden chaos constantly increasing within all systems. His breakthrough was a spark. Building on this foundation, Josiah Gibbs unveiled "free energy" – the untapped potential to do work, like the hidden power within a battery, waiting to be harnessed. Meanwhile, Ludwig Boltzmann, delving into the heart of entropy, exposed the universe's unsettling truth: it favors disorder. He connected this chaos to probability, revealing that the more disorganized a system becomes, the more likely it is to remain that way. "

Make this below paragraph more engaging and curious with proper grammar, please.Don't make it too long.. at most 1000 characters."Imagine a world where fire blazed and ice melted, their inner workings a baffling mystery. Then came Rudolf Clausius, a scientific visionary who dared to challenge the notion of a perfectly ordered universe. He introduced the concept of entropy – a measure of the hidden chaos constantly increasing within all systems. His breakthrough was a spark. Building on this foundation, Josiah Gibbs unveiled "free energy" – the untapped potential to do work, like the hidden power within a battery, waiting to be harnessed. Meanwhile, Ludwig Boltzmann, delving into the heart of entropy, exposed the universe's unsettling truth: it favors disorder. He connected this chaos to probability, revealing that the more disorganized a system becomes, the more likely it is to remain that way. "